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This whole "FanFic" sucks. First of all, this isn't even a fanfic, it just has some ideas/inspiration from animes, besides that, this is original so please put it there. Secondly is Your MC, You are nerfing him to much by making him an idiot with him acting like he is 10. There is no character development, not even his powers develope much. You are given no information about the world he is in, and the Arthur doesn't dwell into it. Some things happened like when his mother suddenly knows about his power for absolutely no reason and is looked over by the Arthur. The Grammer sucks, you can read that in the synopsis. The only good thing about this "fanfic" is the updates as this is a new "fanfic" it updates often. TLDR: The idea is good its just that the Arthur written it poorly, he nerfs his MC really hard by making him dumb and you don't know much about the world. I rate this a 2/10 don't waste your time on this.

An Anime Summoning System

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