Hey, your fellow author here! The story started really tragically. But I hope things will start looking better in the later chapters. (Especially when she meets the male lead aka. sugar daddy lol) I love the book cover, it expresses love and warmth of the two characters which I hope we will come to see. Love how the story develops. There are some grammatical errors and typos, with some editing it'll be no problem. Keep up with the good work and happy writing!
lillyino
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