TBH this is very confusing. It takes immense concentration and note-taking to make sense of what's going on, who's doing what. But on the other hand that aspect of this piece is quite charming. Cute, so to say. It's chaotic narrative continued to catch me off-guard and I couldn't help appreciate the randomness. I look forward to the promised edit coming later, but for now this has been surprisingly enjoyable albeit the writing quality.
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