Review Detail of phoenixhyperion in An illusion

I know it's selfish but I urge you. Please, please, please. Lengthen the story. The first chapter got me hooked alright. You describe your FL really well. And the story plot. It reminded me of "The Guardian" or "Safe haven" by Nicholas Sparks. With the two-faced personality, hiding nasty character beneath the kind and mature facade, seriously it's awesome. And the mystery, the thrill, you laid it all so well. And as the story goes on, you heighten the tension. But in the last chapter, you dropped the bomb too soon. You left you're readers hanging like, wait, that's it? If it's not too much to ask, I urge you to lengthen it. The plot was totally awesome! And ending it just like that won't do your captivating plot any justice.