Review Detail of BotA1836TX in Sadist’s Slave Luna

I enjoy reading this. The chapters leave you wanting more. You feel the pain and your heart aches for the character. However punctuation is a little off but I am aware that it can be a challenge, also appreciate your "Chapter 6 update". When going thru amd looking over chapters and helping with the flow and transition. Just note how you first introduce the inner wolf. Prepare the reading because I was very confused at first. Other than that Amazing! I love how you transition characters allowing the reader to see what is happening from different perspectives. Keep up the great work!