Item: Military System god realm revolution
Rating: 3.6

Blaxk77Lv31yr

2023-06-04 20:41

An editing would be appreciated, I can’t understand how you can post a story with so many grammar faults. Even I who is from a country where English is difficult to learn wouldn’t make that many mistakes. The story is good, the world background excellent, the characters could be better written but still acceptable, the story is finished so no need to wait for update. Other than grammar, the story is a gem that would probably have a deep success if it was readable.

Military System god realm revolution

sukinovski

4.0

401 Chs

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InHisNameLv6

Extremely - EXTREMELY - difficult to read! It took immense effort just to decipher the sentences. I had hoped the story would improve over time, but it unfortunately didn't. The first chapter was hideous, the second showed improvement, but then after the third, quality dipped to all-time-low again. Let's forget about writing quality for a moment and address the elephant in the room: story development and character design. The protagonist so far has 0 (yes zero!) personality. We don't know anything about him apart from the one tiny little detail that he's a transmigrator from our Earth. You would think after this abysmal display of character design things can't possibly get any worse! But no! Somehow it does. The protagonist in a display of absolute genius decides to reform the government to not only have a constitution, but a constitution which directly limits the Emperor's (the MCs) power. Transforming the absolute monarchy into, you guessed it, a constitutional monarchy. This author is clearly either completely ignorant about historical social evolution, or worse...a liberal snowflake.

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sukinovskiAutor

Thanks to everyone who came to read this story. The novel has more than 200 episodes today. It is popular in Thailand. Please be assured that this novel will have enough episodes.

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Blood_RockLv10

Had a stroke trying to read this It would probably be good if the writing was edited The idea overall is really good and I would look forward to this series if it got someone to edit it

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ThatOneGUyLv13

Subpar translation with no effort to the point of being an MTL with little to no editing, author refuses to show the raw hes translating for this title, and now is demanding currency to unlock chapters when it's clear hes just scumming off of someone else's work unlicensed and is a profiteer asking for money for it fan translation with no connection here to whose work he is plagiarizing off of, simply unacceptable so save your coins and boycott this title as the translations trash anyways..

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synncrytech3Lv5

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YoDaddyLv4

Hey author, do you need an editor? I like this novel and would like for more people to read it, I would be glad to help, for free of course.

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kunanon_karupongLv1

I think this novel is very interesting. Including the design of characters, languages and interesting plotlines Anyone who likes Eastern Fantasi must read this story.

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Yue_021Lv14

What's with the low reviews? I understand most of them but for me this is one good of a story. It fits my preferences perfectly, starting from the genres, pacing, and up to the development of the story. I've been looking for novels similar to Release that Witch, World Development System, and King of Technology, and this novel is very similar to those in some aspect.

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TarhanisLv5

Traduction must be done with google trad... It's just hard to decipher the meaning. With some efforts, and an author with brain, this novel could be enjoyable if you didn't have to read twice the same sentence to (partly) understand something.

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