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Primate
PrimateLv43yr
2021-02-19 02:43

Writing Quality : High quality. No noticeable errors that could affect the flow of the story. Updates : As far as I'm concerned, the author is doing a great job here. As an author myself, I know the difficulties that comes with regular updates. Yet, the author is maintaining a stable updates. Story Development : The story follows the tale of an orphan boy in a fantasy world of humans and demons. Rejected by both sides, he would have to choose the side to fight for. Right from the synopsis, the readers are thrust into the fantastic world. And when readers start to read, they'll find it impossible to drop. The story progresses in a great way. No deviation from the main plot. Character Design : The characters are well made. From the little I've seen of them, I just have to commend the author. They are well thought out, especially the MC. World Background : What more can I say about the fantasy world that is not known already. The way the author designed the magical setups, cultivation, races and whole fantasy world in general, is simply amazing. Overall : Great novel by a potentially great author. Highly recommended.

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