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Etiger789
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Can't be bothered to write a full on review, but that's how I view this novel after reading 4 chapters. It's decent but not that good Either. But it's definetly diffrent from other HOTE Fan-fics. 😙😋😎🤩😶☺😋😍😊🙂😎😊😑🙂😚👡👢👡🎓

I am Absolute

Reincarnator113

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Reincarnator113
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Thank you so much and sorry for the late reply. This will help me a lot when writing future chapters.

Etiger789:I guess one would be to change how he reacted. I don't remeber which chapter but he was suprised being reancarnated into COTE But still has knoledge of everything which is weird. Two would be his charachter. He was actually scared of ayanokoji even after everything he went through. Calling him a monster when the Mc should be just as cunning if not more so with future knowledge and training. Plus his wish he got which hopefully won't be trash or bring nothing to the fanfic. And third, being controlled so easily when Ayanakojo managed to semi escape. He's said to show no emotion and not care about anything yet his father calls him kind. When was he kind and when did he even have the opportunity to show kindness when he's been isolated all his life. Forth He got angry seing his mum get beaten and bruised yet he's only ever seen the woman once and for a few minutes. There's no emotional connection for him to actually care, feel bad yes, but let him self be controlled, he'll no. Well those are the points I found baffling. Hope that helps.
Reincarnator113
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Thanks for the review. I really appreciated it. Any mistakes on my part where I can Improve?

Etiger789
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I guess one would be to change how he reacted. I don't remeber which chapter but he was suprised being reancarnated into COTE But still has knoledge of everything which is weird. Two would be his charachter. He was actually scared of ayanokoji even after everything he went through. Calling him a monster when the Mc should be just as cunning if not more so with future knowledge and training. Plus his wish he got which hopefully won't be trash or bring nothing to the fanfic. And third, being controlled so easily when Ayanakojo managed to semi escape. He's said to show no emotion and not care about anything yet his father calls him kind. When was he kind and when did he even have the opportunity to show kindness when he's been isolated all his life. Forth He got angry seing his mum get beaten and bruised yet he's only ever seen the woman once and for a few minutes. There's no emotional connection for him to actually care, feel bad yes, but let him self be controlled, he'll no. Well those are the points I found baffling. Hope that helps.

Kurigohan
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Before read i must ask one question harem or one pairing

Reincarnator113:Thank you so much and sorry for the late reply. This will help me a lot when writing future chapters.