Not bad I really think this book has a lot potential and am excited to see where it goes. The vibe I'm getting for the pwer system is kind of like black clover, expect in this case the mc is the magic book. The author writing style is decent and the grammer is fine too. One suggestion i have is that u make the chapters at least twice as long as what u have now because they are very short but overall I'm very excited and can't wait to see where this goes👍👍👍
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