Review Detail of Katelyn_Privett in THE ORDER OF THE ELEMENTS

Nice story! The vomedic takes on this story make it entertaining in its own way. The only things that stopped me from giving a full 5 stars is the grammar and word choice elements throughout. I'm kind of a stickler for those kinds of things unfortunately. If readers love a story with bits of comedy in a fantasy world setting and an epic MC to follow, this is your book! Just beware of the slight gore detail here and there as presented in the prologue. Keep writing!