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Revamping12345
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This ain't bad, except for the bulky paragraphs at the beginning and a few indenting mistakes but that gets fixed sooner. I love the prologue cause it hooks the reader's attention but in the end, its for u to find out, I recommend reading it tho, its interesting

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Arigatou gozaimasuuuuuuu(thank you for reviewing and ii lease help me promote my novel to others (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈))