Hi Author! I think I'm the first one to give a review? I'll make it nice but don't worry I like your premise, it's light and interesting. The words were easy to understand, world background is good too! Story development somehow was moving fast and I think it's not a big problem, Overall, I added it to my library to support you. Keep up the good work author!
Shairoe
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me gustaShairoe:Thank you so much! If you need a story to be reviewed, I'm happy to help!