Review Detail of StarLight0012 in The Color of Night

Item: The Color of Night
Rating: 4.8

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StarLight0012Lv23yrStarLight0012

Your writing is excelled and the development of story are really interesting. Over all, everything is good, except one. Sometime when I read, I don't really get or has no idea what just happened. 🙂💐

The Color of Night

Blackturtle

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Thank you so much for your review (appreciated by me) I'll look forward to making scenes less complicated.

3yr