Review Detail of Killler_Queen in when time ... stopped

Item: when time ... stopped
Rating: 1.4

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Killler_QueenLv143yrKilller_Queen

I cant deal with this kind of Writing, the author switched from him to her to you. You need to work in PoVs and and Decide the gender! Its confusing af and pls try to fix this!

when time ... stopped

Alezero

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Respuestas4

SameliesLv5Samelies

not just that, there are random skips in train of thought as well as parts that I just can't understand at all....

3yr

BloodblossomsLv15Bloodblossoms

why use comas, when you can use full stops . . . . . .

Samelies:not just that, there are random skips in train of thought as well as parts that I just can't understand at all....

3yr

Sin_of_GREEDLv13Sin_of_GREED

in which world is mc in??

3yr

YourShadowsenpaiLv14YourShadowsenpai

I’m still confused with the gender

3yr