Review Detail of Imperial_Fox in HARRY POTTER: Causing Chaos in the Wizarding world

At first, the MC had conviction to become strong and practiced. but then it went down the drain. he became a prick to his mother, treats her like air while she loves him wholeheartedly. No real character development till now. (chapter 15) After he went hogwarts, the drain connected to the filthiest of sewers. Suddenly Harry has more raw power, he nearly pissed his pants in front of the troll, ron killed the troll, MC had no involvement whatsoever, just played dead. Blamed it all on plot armor this and that. Acts like a whining little bittch world background hasn't been discovered yet and the story is just following the path of cannon. even the writing quality isn't that great. You guys are better reading something else and don't waste time like I did. ** : I think author will delete this review so let's see when it happens