Review Detail of GrymAbyss in Reborn In Naruto As An Experiment

Writing Quality- 4 ✧✧✧✧Obviously not perfect, but it's great, unnoticeable, uncommon mistakes. Sometimes there are odd moments where there's huge walls of text or times where a paragraph could be better broken up, and also the lack of indicators of who is talking sometimes when mc and Naruto talk, but over all good enough for me.Story Development- 5 ✧✧✧✧✧I like the route it's going, but admittedly it's not for everyone. I like the realistic twist we have on the character development. But again, not for everyone, with the recent depression coming up, some people *cough* insecure incels *cough* can't take it when the mc isn't a gigachad megamind edgelord cucking harem overlord. So obviously that on top of the slow paced slice of life will turn some readers away. But I personally like it.Character Design- 5 ✧✧✧✧✧I like John's -Now Haruko- character design. Again, a bit more realistic, not some "Self proclaimed loser." who just so happens to have moments of "Oh, I forgot I used to do this!" moments at convenient times. Nope, it's just a normal guy learning and experiencing the world in a normal manner. Again, the design of the character will obviously not be everyone's cup of tea, since even though he has powers related to killing, he isn't a murder hobo. A few have even refered to him as a "goody two shoes." I wouldn't go so far as to say that, but I will say that he is a generally good person. Childish at times, and overly mature at others. Whether this was intentional or a writing mistake is unknown, but I'm inclined to believe it's the former. Update Stability- 5 ✧✧✧✧✧A solid 4 or 3 chapters a week in accordance to the authors bi-daily upload schedule that he's only missed once up until know. Very satisfactory Overall - 4.8 ✧✧✧✧✧I enjoy the story and I personally have no complaints at all. I enjoyed my binge read, and I'll be awaiting the next update.