Review Detail of Macabreseraph in my little mate

It seems to have a good base but the grammar in the translation is atrocious. The werewolves partnering system also reminds me a lot of the imprinting the werewolves from twilight go through. I think there's a lot of potential in the story with a little proofreading to fix the grammar, I think that would also improve the flow of the story immensely.