Plot is below average even when it comes to wishfullfilment OP Mc’s. The MC is nothing really special, you won’t exactly hate nor love him, he is just there. Story is kinda clumsy and monotone and what bugs me more than anything author couldn’t be bothered to use proper punctuation like any normal person that has been through elementary school. Instead of basic quatation marks ie. ””, the author uses [ ] to mark speech in paragraphs which is annoying as h*ll considering most use ot for system remarks or voices inside a characters head, instead of regular speech. Grammar is meh aswell, it’s readable but you can find mistakes quite often. All in all, if you can find something better, you shouldn’t bother with this fic. Personally I’m scarping the bottom of Naruto fic barrel so here I am, left fisaapointed once again.
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