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ali_seifiLv44yr
2020-08-24 14:28

First of all I'm writing it from chapter 4 so some changes might be made to the story. Mc is without knowledge about the happenings of RI because he simply hasn't read it and he also doesn't have any special or op gu or tool. He's constantly bullied but can't react and....He's loser in all sense. Well let's see how it goes. But author has good writing capabilities and perfect background setting for mc

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GowthamYesG
GowthamYesGAuthor

Thank you for all the comments and review. Puts a big 😊 on my face. I am trying to follow the 'weak to strong' trope so stay tuned. Right now, he is a mortal and a kid so losing against adult gu masters is natural. But he will get stronger. I promise.🤞

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Rildec
RildecLv11

if you're expecting an op mc then look elsewhere. if you're expecting a competent mc then look elsewhere. if you're expecting wish fulfillment, badass mc, cunning mc, or even a non generic mc? look elsewhere. my first impressions of the main character have been lack luster so far. Bullied, then manipulated, ostracized, and again bullied and manipulated? It seems like authors writing a generic tragic character in which the world jut won't give him a break. Any bravado mc had from the beginning is literally beaten from him, leaving him armless, with low potential and almost resigned to his life. He clings to doing the right thing even when he is in some of the worst positions to be in. Maybe the author wants to draw emotion, a feeling of unwavering justice, but it comes off as a pathetic, last ditch effort to both end the suffering he has resigned himself and to do the right thing, adding some type of worth to his life. It looks like mc will be setup as tragic underappreciated martyr repeatedly until he has to contend with fang yuan in some kind of good vs evil battle. What attracted people to reading the original probably won't apply to this fanfic. If you like an unwavering fool in the face of a hopeless situation, striving for what he thinks is right then maybe this is for you. As the writing quality and grammar are a step above atleast 95% of what comes into webnovel. The author might say its from weak to strong but i don't think mc will ever truly be "strong" atleast compared to what author will make him face. Maybe weak to decent. TLDR Writing is good, grammar is good, mc is naive/foolish and gets himself into trouble a lot, while trouble also seems to find him.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

the stories interesting, and compared to the other RF FF's this is better. The MC is someone with no knowledge about RI in RI...interesting, if done properly. But the thing about this bk is the MC is a retard, or heroic retard. -This MC SI's into a body, and the person was hated by everyone because of who he was, basically his status was beneath that of a slave. And MC knows this, and yet he tries to be hero. apparently MC has no common sense, this dude has no power, no help, barely any food, etc and he stands up to help a random, and the person he stands upto is a young master. And because of his stupidity he gets basically beat up. He later punches the young master, him, the village pariah punches someone with status ....MC isnt smart. Funny thing is apparently MC got beat up in his past life cause he tried to help when he himself could do barely anything. So, I suppose a smart and planning MC isnt a major focus. MC dost learn from past Another thing is that MC dosnt plan....he SI's into a world he knows nothing about and is in a hated body, one would expect him to collect info, plan, etc but he dosnt. would've been nice to see MC planning And something, I dont understand is how come he isnt a slave? his status was below a slave, why? everyone hates him because of his origin, so when he became orphaned, how come he wasnt forced to be come a slave? he could find a job even...him, a pariah of his society. So, I suppose to read this, u need to accept a stupid MC. other than these things which can easily be fixed later, its interesting

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