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the stories interesting, and compared to the other RF FF's this is better. The MC is someone with no knowledge about RI in RI...interesting, if done properly. But the thing about this bk is the MC is a retard, or heroic retard. -This MC SI's into a body, and the person was hated by everyone because of who he was, basically his status was beneath that of a slave. And MC knows this, and yet he tries to be hero. apparently MC has no common sense, this dude has no power, no help, barely any food, etc and he stands up to help a random, and the person he stands upto is a young master. And because of his stupidity he gets basically beat up. He later punches the young master, him, the village pariah punches someone with status ....MC isnt smart. Funny thing is apparently MC got beat up in his past life cause he tried to help when he himself could do barely anything. So, I suppose a smart and planning MC isnt a major focus. MC dost learn from past Another thing is that MC dosnt plan....he SI's into a world he knows nothing about and is in a hated body, one would expect him to collect info, plan, etc but he dosnt. would've been nice to see MC planning And something, I dont understand is how come he isnt a slave? his status was below a slave, why? everyone hates him because of his origin, so when he became orphaned, how come he wasnt forced to be come a slave? he could find a job even...him, a pariah of his society. So, I suppose to read this, u need to accept a stupid MC. other than these things which can easily be fixed later, its interesting
Reverend Insanity: Against the tide
GowthamYesG
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Yay! My first review! 😊 Thanks for that. Given that the MC has only started living in RI world for only a few months at this point, he might make a few amateur mistakes for a while. But his sense of justice was intentional writing on my part. My inspiration for this fan fiction was to create a righteous path character that can go face to face with the demon Fang Yuan 😈.
GowthamYesG:Yay! My first review! 😊 Thanks for that. Given that the MC has only started living in RI world for only a few months at this point, he might make a few amateur mistakes for a while. But his sense of justice was intentional writing on my part. My inspiration for this fan fiction was to create a righteous path character that can go face to face with the demon Fang Yuan 😈.
David_Drake:I can't accept a MC this stupid. IF he was ignorant it would be understanding, but he literally repeats his previous mistakes and some how the plot allows these foolish things to work. It isn't good writing and should be rewritten.
David_Drake:I can't accept a MC this stupid. IF he was ignorant it would be understanding, but he literally repeats his previous mistakes and some how the plot allows these foolish things to work. It isn't good writing and should be rewritten.
GowthamYesG:Are these your comments even after reading into volume 2? Just curious.image
If this fang yuan second life I don’t believe that ur mc will able to defeat fang yuan cus he have 6 rank memory of he first life and know what going to happen , and ur mc have no knowledge of reverend insanity, unless you make ur mc a heaven defy genius or super lucky man alive
Dragon_of_Chaos:Can u tell is this fang yuan second or first life ??
Dragon_of_Chaos:If this fang yuan second life I don’t believe that ur mc will able to defeat fang yuan cus he have 6 rank memory of he first life and know what going to happen , and ur mc have no knowledge of reverend insanity, unless you make ur mc a heaven defy genius or super lucky man alive
GowthamYesG:Yup. That's why it's like struggling against the tide!
As of now (Ch 56), he is following the Earth path with a minor in Transformation path but he will be like Fang Yuan and transition to other paths in the future (spoiler territory 🤞)
Dragon_of_Chaos:Is the mc walking on time path, space path or transformation path ?
GowthamYesG:As of now (Ch 56), he is following the Earth path with a minor in Transformation path but he will be like Fang Yuan and transition to other paths in the future (spoiler territory 🤞)
GowthamYesG:Yay! My first review! 😊 Thanks for that. Given that the MC has only started living in RI world for only a few months at this point, he might make a few amateur mistakes for a while. But his sense of justice was intentional writing on my part. My inspiration for this fan fiction was to create a righteous path character that can go face to face with the demon Fang Yuan 😈.