Review Detail of ranmaro in The Whisper In The Ice

The story is captivating from the first lines of the synopsis, which drew the general view of the novel. the first few chapters are interesting, and the grammatical errors aren't that many or bad that might annoy me in reading and understanding the writing. Don't worry, you are writing very good, and the fact this is your first novel is amazing. Keep the hard work, I will cheer for you :)