Review Detail of BlindBandit in The Beasts of Men

A few grammatical errors here and there, a good concept of the mc, I loved it as there's a dash of Mmorpg in it, which am a big fan of since I was a kid, overall the world building is great aswell and I'm expecting more from this book... The main problem that I have is low stability on updates!! Author, put some elbow grease on it, and I shall thank you for your hard work... :)