Review Detail of SSKV_R3D in Auroras of Senses

Fantasy/adventure is my thing specially on video games and movies, so after knowing that your book is a fantasy/adventure I was like "I have to try this..", after reading your 20th chapter I noticed that the flow of the book is good, sometimes it was was sometimes it was slow, character development is good too. but just like the other book I've in webnovel so far, I suggest putting more twist in the story, sometimes it's a little predictable... That's all :) great work to the author