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The beginning is a bit boring but I hope the author improves as the story goes on. There should be ground-breaking actions seeing that it's someone from another world with advanced magic knowledge and with a system cheat, but it's just a boring guy blindly following the system with no initiative. A weak to strong story with no one to prove anything to, then what's the use? I really hope the author improves because the story still has potential...

FullMoon Necromancer

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thank you for your honest criticism, I will try to improve it.