The author has a unique, but interesting style of portraying the story. The grammar and command over the language are absolutely flawless, no doubt in that and the story too has some gripping edges. The only problem is the ML's conflicting character and his actions which at times becomes quite confusing. Other than that, no complaints. Keep up the good work author.

If I'm going to be really honest, this story smells like personal regrets. Either that, or a lot of assuming and not enough research, because I can't remember the last time anyone was considered underage for at 20, especially in ancient or rural Asia. This is set in China, right? Because Wei Lee sounds an awful lot like Chinese, and if I'm assuming correctly, his sister's name is quite possibly Wei Mei, or he just never calls her by name. Anyway, there are a lot of stray commas that don't really belong in the middle of sentences, and more than a few instances of incorrect verbiage from what I could tell after reading the first 5 chapters. Also, not to shame anyone or anything, but Lee comes across as more than a bit ******uous and entitled. While I usually look forward to watching characters of his ilk develop, this story seems more like it was written for the writer than any potential readers, which is not to my taste. It could be for other people though. Just my personal opinion, which is entirely objective. Anyway, you might want to add an 's' to 'uniform' in the second sentence of the first chapter, and get rid of some of the 'every day' mentions because it gets a little redundant. Good luck in your endeavors, and I hope you do well moving forward. :)

Man, i do love your writing. keep it up. story line and description is great and i love it. The way your story gives of the same vibiness as Mortal instruments and PJO is almost hooking. Great Work author.[img=recommend]

The author uses vivid descriptions to bring the setting of their story to life as well as to give personality to their characters. Where I am at in the story, the MC is a flawed and lacking individual, and the way the author illustrates this is a testament to their skill in writing. I'm looking forward to seeing how his character will be developed. The author has a pretty good command of language, which is evident in their grammar and word choice. Overall this story is worth checking out, and I will be following its updates :D

The story is beautiful and the character development is just too engaging. I loved how well written this story is. It keeps you on a edge and makes you want to read more!! Looking forward for more chapters.!

I was looking for something to read... and when I start to read this story I was like "woooww" ... I love it, I'm reading this and I'm in the 10th chapter, but I need to make justice for this story and I need to tell this is incredibly so well written! The descriptions of the place, situation and character are so well done that it could show me the entire world from that aldea... You have a gift author, don't stop to writte cause your way to expres is wonderful ... I will continue reading!

Well, to be honest, it was a good read actually. But the MC is pretty conflicting and it's really bland. I mean, I have trouble spotting his personality was and the events in the book are pretty annoying and not so good. I advise the author to make it more realistic so the readers could relate and understand the book more easily. So overall, continue doing your best!

So far so good! please keep releasing! I can't wait to read more

The story's format still needs improvement, but the potential is good. Keep it up, author! Hoping you could also drop an initial review for my new novel. Its title is Isekai Institute. Thank you!