Review Detail of EIo_Police in Monstergirl Rancher (Currently undergoing Rewrite)

while the story idea is really nice I have the feeling that this is a very slow story. the fact that the church is completely corrupted while being overseen by a god is beyond me but its probably just to add drama. currently there was no talk about the mc becoming stronger which is a bad sign in my opinion since that means he has to relay on others for help. the mc also doesn't really think and doesn't pay attention to the world around him.