It's pretty good. I gave 5 🌟 for the writing quality because this author I the only one I know that go back to correct the flaws pointed out by the readers. The story pretty much follow Dragon Ball with a smarter and slightly stronger Goku but it got its peculiarities. I especially loved the fact that Oolong won't be going to Pilaf castle with the team (one useless wish avoided). The characters are changing due to MC influence and it's good. It's slightly rushed but everyone know Dragon Ball already (If you don't, you should go read it asap). There's two things I didn't like in this novel though: - Firstly, the reason to justify Gohan death (it's possible but come on) - Secondly, the bonus of chapter 5 (I think) that shows MC funeral in his old world that's being turned in apocaly**e (I presume). Why do that? What's the point of this 'apocaly**e'? Would he return later to help them? Perso, I don't like dimensional travel. It ruined too much of good stories. Anyway this two let-downs (imo) don't impair the story quality so I recommend it.
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