Item: My Seven Souls : The Legend of The Queen of The Ocean
Rating: 5

TheWonderofEgyptLv14yr

2020-07-11 17:55

The story is good. The writing is very details and meticulous. There are so many characters, but the author describe the important ones in a very good way. The world building is impressive. The pace of the plot is normal I think, not that slow, not that fast either. The update stability is quite stable to be honest, it's just that the amount of chapters per weeks is too few lol coz I hope it could be more than that. But, I love the story as a whole. RECOMMENDED! ✔ PS: Author, where is the romance? Give me the romance more 😥😍

My Seven Souls : The Legend of The Queen of The Ocean

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