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Deztrre
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Best System i ever Read about. Story had potential but was bogged down by rushed writing and pacing. Full of Plotholes. Characters make no sense, act like Teenagers but kill without remorse. Story development is meh. I only read it because it is the only story with such a setting. 2/5 Had potential, got ruined by bad writing.

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BTW similar story but better writing is on Scribblehub search 'Symbiosis (and my psycho girlfriend…)'