Review Detail of Connor_Stokes in Adam Black The Supreme Sorcerer

I really like the concept and the plot, but the poor grammar, typos, incorrect words, and inconsistencies make this story hard to read. I have read all the chapters here and on the previous version. If you are like me and can read over/through the typos by mentally substituting the correct word, then you can get through this story. Even then the author could use a lot more time Googling then words he/she wants to use that come from other stories. It’s almost insulting that the author knows he/she can’t remember how to spell a word, but instead of looking it up, he/she just guesses. I would love to read more of this story, but it needs a lot of work.