Review Detail of Inferno_Vor in REINCARNATION IN TODAG WITH INVINCIBLE DEVOURING SYSTEM

A good amount of writing mistakes, especially on he/she part. Stable update rate. The story is hard to follow unless you read TDG and remember the beginning completely, since the author just skips time randomly without noting how much passed. The characters are pretty awful, the girls basically fall for the MC on their first interactions and don't mind him entering their personal space, but get shy for some reason... It's going the generic wish fulfillment route. The world background doesn't even comply with how the main story goes even though the author says it'll follow the original, minor example is how the story starts when the characters are 12 instead of 13 or how no one supposedly notices mc jump 5 levels of cultivation.