Review Detail of Sweet_Serenity in Fate DxD:Archer Reborn

I don't like it I can get past the bad grammar from time to time just fine but the plot gets more and more convoluted for no apparent reason, and this is supposed to be archer right? why does he keeps on revealing his secrets all the time? please even if the plot is childishly bad at least have them in character instead of bending their personality just to force interaction and plot