Review Detail of amaturewriter in Arifureta tale(from common place to world's greatest)

Its interesting BUT the grammar and structure and character development are bare minimum.....the writer legit puts Blah Blah Blah in the dialogues when he dosnt write what they are saying....the dialogues are all messed up and unless you read it..you wont know its a dialogue.......overall whilst the idea has credit......everything else is pretty ****ty..........kinda cruel..but you wrote...Blah...Blah Blah..so yeh