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Review Detail of PeakCulture in MHA: Living as Mineta is hard

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*Post Completion Review* Writing style is rough, as many reviewers have pointed out. Author can be repetitive and inner monologue can get really tiresome sometimes. Ending feels rushed to me, like the author didn't know how to expand beyond the currently incomplete series and write a satisfying conclusion. Good idea that needed just a bit more polish. MC has a system that gives him more abilities if he does naughty things with girls. Half way through, author maybe forgot about this aspect of the system. He can also buy or upgrade abilities with points from dating girls, but again author forgets about this or he could not come up with any more abilities MC can buy. Again, good idea, but needed more time to cook instead of rushing to have daily updates. MC just got too OP too quickly so he literally had to make up a villain so he can roleplay as a hero. BUT I think overall, it is one of the better novels on this site, and one of the best MHA novels as well. If nothing else, the consistency of updates and author actually completing it and middle part of novel makes up for the weaker aspects.

MHA: Living as Mineta is hard

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