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Review Detail of Nekov in Journey through Teyvat

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Nekov
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Nice. Keep going. Tran. Quality - Overall good, but has some mistakes. Updating Stability - You Just started your story so I can't say anything about it. Story Development - Not too fast, not too slow. I like it. Character design - Although we only seen Bennet and our Mc it's still good. (don't add romantic if you didn't ever wrote it or if you don't feel like you can do it properly, pls) World Background - You kinda just put him in already existing world so yeah...

Journey through Teyvat

Kevo2

Liked it!

me gusta

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Kevo2
Kevo2AutorKevo2

Thanks for the review i’ll do my best to improve the quality of the story as I go on.