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CailinMatthews
CailinMatthewsLv124yr
2020-04-23 18:32

Updating my review now that the novel reached 100 chapters! If you want my personal opinion, I've been through a lot getting here. For one, I've threatened various characters. (Yes, that's the first thing that came to my mind to say). I've nearly cried on several occasions. I've cheered, I've sympathized and I've feared for Ye Jiao. And I am here to stay for more! She is such a mature child that sometimes I forget that she is barely 10 years old. From surviving bullies to taking 50 lashes of a rod to experiencing lost to resisting poison... the adventure never stops! And in each one, Ye Jiao rises above! Her journey is also much more touching for me than others. Usually, we hear and read about people once they've accomplished something worthwhile. We admire them for it. Then, we get the back story and find them much more inspiring. Most stories start this way as well because of this reality. In here, the opposite happened. The back story becomes the first one we hear about. This brings something that a flashback can't fully utilize. Attachment. By the end of the story, the sense of fulfillment will feel much more sweeter when looking back on everything Ye Jiao went through. I am still looking forward to that feeling. Keep up the great work, Sorahana <3

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Sorahana
SorahanaAutor

Thank you for your review, CailinMatthews ❤️ 😊 I'm taking another unusual route for story again haha. Hearing that you get attached to the characters make me very happy. Thank you for all of your support. I wish to see you at the end of the journey 🤗🤗🤗 Love, Sorahana

Patricia_Chong_Goh
Patricia_Chong_GohLv15

Another one from Sorahana! I look forward to starting on this one when the chapters build up to 400 but looks like there’s no romance? By the way, I enjoyed Flowers Bloom very much.

CailinMatthews
CailinMatthewsLv12

There will be some romance but the MC, as of almost 200 chapters, is only 11 years old. That element is... a little too far away at the moment. Haha. We have a numbers of readers already rejecting other guys and saying they're not worthy of her 😂😂😂😂 And to not talk about romance because she's still a baby in everyone's eyes XD

Patricia_Chong_Goh:Another one from Sorahana! I look forward to starting on this one when the chapters build up to 400 but looks like there’s no romance? By the way, I enjoyed Flowers Bloom very much.
Patricia_Chong_Goh
Patricia_Chong_GohLv15

🤣

azzeshi
azzeshiLv4

So is it like Yun Ji's stories?? The sad backstory sounds like Phoenix Destiny, and the growth and journey sounds a lot like Lady Cultivator Both of which are amazing and unique

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CailinMatthews
CailinMatthewsLv12

I hate how I think of more to say AFTER I submitted a review. *smh* Really, Cai. Really? *smh more* As a more in depth review, I'd like to point out how the writer depicts Ye Jiao's journey so well. Not only does she focus on her advancement as an Eon Energy Master but she also writes about her journey in companionship. The story itself embodies different elements in the MC's life and how it impacts her along the way. The balance among these elements are superb. The writing of them also impacts readers effectively. Whether a reader is a loner or an extrovert, he/she will find herself able to relate to Ye Jiao and the other characters. The cast is pact with personalities. No one is complacent or unimportant. They all contribute to the story beautifully—these includes the antagonists (although they seem easy to hate tbh) but if there's anything I learned in the writer's first novel, "Flowers Bloom From Battlefield," is that the younger ones have more chance to grow and redeem themselves. Most of their attitude comes with upbringing. I hope this is tackled later on in the story more when they could decide for themselves rather on relying on others' opinion. The flow of the journey seem to start out slow but the advantage of it is easing readers into the world the story has. The MC is merely a child at the beginning, a phase were she herself is discovering her own world. Her adventure leads her to a number of places and I have no doubt she'll travel more, letting us deeper into the setting. The road ahead of Ye Jiao is still long and I can't wait to be there every step of the way. Only more adventures and milestones awaits!

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