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The story is good with a lot of details and a few minor grammatical mistakes that most people won't notice or simply care about. The characters that are supposed to be likeable have you emotionally invested in them and the characters that are supposed to be unlikeable have you hating their guts and wait for them to die a slow and painful death. World background isn't mentioned much, only the parts that you will need to know immediately or after a few chapters. The cooking part is better than other novels where 1 guy runs the whole restaurant and finishes cooking in seconds. The author actually researches what he is writing about. Read chapters 36

A Living Armour owns a Tavern

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Thank you. I don't research as much since I am a cook in real life. I'm not good in writing, since English is not my first language. Thank you for reading my work!

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I mean you still add links to where you got your information from. Unlike some other authors who don't know what they are writing about and just try to bs their way with faulty logic.

tinapaykid:Thank you. I don't research as much since I am a cook in real life. I'm not good in writing, since English is not my first language. Thank you for reading my work!