Review Detail of eastasianlover in A Living Armour owns a Tavern

So, really liking how the story is developing so far. Your novel follows the advice from the Book of Authors to the T. I myself could not help putting info dump in the first chapter for my novel, but you did a great job on that aspect! I guess we will get to explore the world with Gus. And that is something I really like. I am assuming English is not your first language, you could definitely better the grammar a bit. It will make it easier for everyone to read, especially keeping the tenses consistent. I can also see that you are a cook, or at least interested in cooking since the cooking descriptions are really detailed. I think I will continue reading! Keep up the great work!