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Well, that's most disappointing work from you that I ever see. If I wouldn't know who write it, I would never guess. It's a simple story. Post-apocalyptic with second chance and mature mc. Yeah, one of those. What makes it special? You already could guess from the name. And that's one part of what wrong with this novel. It's extremely boring. And his unique occupation doesn't help in the slightest. He don't have intresting abilities or much strength of his own(duuh), and whole using of others doesn't come intresting either. Because it's not some emperor that rule over people , but boss and employees /slaves. You can feel difference just from words. 70 chapters just info dumps after info dumps. Chapters really short. And there is no intresting characters either. Most of the time we just see how mc makes logical decisions and trying to be useful... Or given more information. Character mc is other problem. It's logical that he turns out the way that he is acting and he's choices are very pragmatic...but it's just that. There is nothing to talk about. Well aside times that he doesn't act like he is supposed to act, and helping out after he confirms 3 times in his head that this is useless act... Already could see how he trying to create his own organization and bring as many people as he can. Because it's actually logical decision ... Still nothing interesting. In the end. It's just a cliche story about second chance in appocalypsis. That's all...

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Never did read that story even though I keep hearing about it. It is just more fun writing my own adventure than reading other people's adventure, hence the first person thingy. Hahaha =] I'm on like chapter 1800ish or so (in my head) ~ so much to write about, so little time X_X

Yuri_is_Ntr:Not quite but it's still the same. And mc is perfect for this kind of story....already on 90 chapter, but I seriously don't see any appeal. Reminds me of randidly story but more tame.
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Thanks for the lengthy review =) Not quite an apocalyptic story. His strength is already stated at the prologue, so there is no need for me to restate his strength in later chapters. He should be able to hold his own against pretty much any opponents except for the big bads, but he already stated that he isn't a fighter. You should not take that as literal, as he means violence is not the only way to solve a problem. His class is a Merchant, so it is always about the most profitable solution. His eradic (and sometimes contradicting) nature is due to him wanting to regain his humanity. I think his actions are justified due to him being the legacy of humanity. I have not stated how long he have lived after humanity and Earth is gone, but it is implied to be incredibly long time due to the near infinite Wealth he had amassed, just to kill the one responsible... but when he succeeds, it doesn't bring him peace, so he choose to go back and redo everything. Except, things are never worked out as planned. huh? Anyway, gone to write more chapters.

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Not quite but it's still the same. And mc is perfect for this kind of story....already on 90 chapter, but I seriously don't see any appeal. Reminds me of randidly story but more tame.

Erosire:Thanks for the lengthy review =) Not quite an apocalyptic story. His strength is already stated at the prologue, so there is no need for me to restate his strength in later chapters. He should be able to hold his own against pretty much any opponents except for the big bads, but he already stated that he isn't a fighter. You should not take that as literal, as he means violence is not the only way to solve a problem. His class is a Merchant, so it is always about the most profitable solution. His eradic (and sometimes contradicting) nature is due to him wanting to regain his humanity. I think his actions are justified due to him being the legacy of humanity. I have not stated how long he have lived after humanity and Earth is gone, but it is implied to be incredibly long time due to the near infinite Wealth he had amassed, just to kill the one responsible... but when he succeeds, it doesn't bring him peace, so he choose to go back and redo everything. Except, things are never worked out as planned. huh? Anyway, gone to write more chapters.