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New fic with a unique type of u know power or entity within the mc and in the elemental nation as far as the chapter development at the first 1-3 chapter it is ok and from then till the recent chapter a bit slow and mostly the chapter contain the story of cannon but as it is in the growing order so that is also ok just plz dont make cannon story in the later chapters and no pov bull**** plz because only mc story no one else's pov because it's just waste of chapter and time
A Naruto Fan-Fic
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U r right that different pov helps make the story better but what i meant was the repeated original cannon story,if the different pov contains new story or even a little differwnt route then its ok
DragonkingKyo:Disagree multiple POVs can help the world of the story feel alive
that I can understand little but they might be doing it for those that don't know the original story.(as unlikely as that might be)
Gamer2800:U r right that different pov helps make the story better but what i meant was the repeated original cannon story,if the different pov contains new story or even a little differwnt route then its ok