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mohamad24xx
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I like the story and way you try put more logic in story and it doesn't have much cliche in it but it need some refinement in grammar, fix what you can and use some free tools that are available on internet

Metal Universe

Zmp

Liked it!

me gusta

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Zmp
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Thank.