Going to be honest here. I like it so far but sometimes plot progression feels slow the writings good but the world isn’t quiet fleshed out yet, characters interactions are a bit repetitive and the story’s a cliche consept. Author feel free to experiment more right now your limiting what you can do with your own characters. For example give me a small girl with a fragile frame who is actually a berserker class. Or a guy who’s a mage who specifically specializes in the unique abilities of lower level monsters and amplifying them by putting them into weapons. Placing the mc in a fantasy world is good but what makes it or breaks it in these novels is how they grow and change and the interesting world or people around them. Basically feel free to draw outside the lines. Until then I’ll be waiting for your next update. :) thanks -Anonimusly
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