Review Detail of anon88 in Curse of building 13(Hiatus)

There is only one chapter available so this review will be limited. The plot (from the synopsis) is inventive. There is a haunted building, but it is not a residence but a commercial building. After the building was abandoned, people who visited the property disappear. I am excited to see where the author goes with this setup. One thing I did not like about the plot is that the characters have typically Chinese speech patterns, but the setting is Tokyo and characters are supposedly Japanese. It would be more logical if the settings and characters where from a Chinese city.