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Review Detail of Tarhanis in Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon

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Tarhanis
TarhanisLv55yrTarhanis

Very good story. But now you are at this point you should slow down,give more detail. Because if you continue like this you will end this story in 40 chapters. And feel more like a summary than a story ...

Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon

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Tetsou
TetsouLv11Tetsou

at least well get a complete story rather than a stopped one

Tarhanis
TarhanisLv5Tarhanis

True, but at least we have a STORY in hiatus no a "summary" a quick telling of events ...