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cloudgugu
cloudguguLv45yrcloudgugu

How I wish there'll be more chapters...😅 As someone who is not accurate in English, this for me is perfect. The way the writer describes the girl's life allows me to empathize her so much. For Character design and story development, I don't have much to say for there is only one chapter. However, I can see that the girl is living a very fragile life as of now. There are many possibilities in this story, with such opening, the plot can be anything. Overall, this is an excellent first chapter. I'll keep your book in my library for now. Hope there'll be an update soon so I can do another review on the character design and story development.

Elastic Boundaries

IceSnowball

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cloudgugu
cloudguguLv4cloudgugu

Sorry, I gave 4 on the stability of updating. You deserved 5 in other criteria.😊

IceSnowball
IceSnowballAutorIceSnowball

Thank you for your review😊

IceSnowball
IceSnowballAutorIceSnowball

Thanks for adding this story to your library😊. If you're interested, I've updated a new chapter to this story.

cloudgugu
cloudguguLv4cloudgugu

I read it. I'm really curious now esp the last part. Waiting for the next chapter!!

IceSnowball:Thanks for adding this story to your library😊. If you're interested, I've updated a new chapter to this story.
IceSnowball
IceSnowballAutorIceSnowball

Thanks for reading😊

cloudgugu:I read it. I'm really curious now esp the last part. Waiting for the next chapter!!