Review Detail of Tintagel in Chairman of The Magic Council

As of Chapter 55 The most disappointing Akikan fiction yet. It's disturbing how he talks about the mc as a kid. Downright creepy. Talking about a 4-5 year olds **** for multiple paragraphs is just too much. Even if you look past that, this story is a bore. Akikan has this story by a leash, and is dragging the poor thing against it's will. The story doesn't flow and it feels forced. At no point have I felt any excitement while reading, it just drones on. I'm just waiting for him to inevitably drop it and move on to a new idea.