Review Detail of MrAntukin in Lucky person in a Fantasy World and had a game interface!

Im shamelessly going to put my message here but anyways ummm...If you find any mistakes like wrong grammar or something like that. That I can fix. Because I like to write stories as i have a wild imagination and i can visualize every detail in a story. And im willing to improve more. That is all thankyl you for reading this and my story. Have a good day / night. 😌