Review Detail of Soupreme in Fate/Inheritance

Everything’s a 5 for me except in writing quality and story development as in the first 13 chapters, i was a little but disoriented on how the sentence format worked and there’s this case of 4th wall breaks that, not only acts as a plot point but also mixes the dialogue, making me confused as to whether its a direct quotation, a thought, or whatnot. Besides that, everything else is good, you got my attention, thank you author-san for making this, and I’ll be waiting for more, because it’s nice.