I hate the way you're breaking the forth for world building. Your devaluing worth or importance of a character when you're introducing them. My point is why should we as reader care of your character do in the future or why should we invest in a character if he's worth is none existent. If you're doing it for a gag then is not funny or should I say it's a waste of time.
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