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Review Detail of NewGoldie in Fate/Inheritance

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NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv135yrNewGoldie

I hate the way you're breaking the forth for world building. Your devaluing worth or importance of a character when you're introducing them. My point is why should we as reader care of your character do in the future or why should we invest in a character if he's worth is none existent. If you're doing it for a gag then is not funny or should I say it's a waste of time.

Fate/Inheritance

Sleeping_Moon

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Sleeping_Moon
Sleeping_MoonAutorSleeping_Moon

Ano~... I know I don't have much right to say this but some characters I placed will have key factors in the future. Do note this is not a Xianxia/Wuxia novel where people with thin and thick faces collide... >.>

Sleeping_Moon
Sleeping_MoonAutorSleeping_Moon

Still thank you for your opinion~ :3

JMaian
JMaianLv5JMaian

Hahaha......... this is a fan.fic, please check your sources. Hahaha..........