Review Detail of Plutonium in Fate/Inheritance
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Too much useless information. You are breaking the 4th wall too much. Haven’t seen character development and some things happens without reason, I am seriously confused. So I’m done, good luck breaking the 4th wall as you probably already saw my reaction to reading this.
Fate/Inheritance
Sleeping_Moon
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Hmmm I think I got what you mean but as I said I love to listen to other's opinions and to be honest these 4th wall breaking is just a gag I'm planning to use when Zelretch is around or in some things that needs to really address the audience. But if you want to drop the novel feel free to do so sir I will still thank you for reading my work :3
At least you can take criticism. Not like other a##hole that think they are top of the world. I will probably check your Novel after it has collected more chapters. Best of luck.
Sleeping_Moon:Hmmm I think I got what you mean but as I said I love to listen to other's opinions and to be honest these 4th wall breaking is just a gag I'm planning to use when Zelretch is around or in some things that needs to really address the audience. But if you want to drop the novel feel free to do so sir I will still thank you for reading my work :3